dk323.livejournal.com ([identity profile] dk323.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dk323 2008-12-08 06:17 pm (UTC)

Oh, poor Ten!

I agree. :(

This was really interesting, with the flashback woven into the present day. I liked the interaction between the Doctor and Martha, and how she was able to see how much he cared for her in the little things.

Thank you. I'm pleased that my flashbacks worked out the way I wanted them to (though I was tempted to extend some of them). That's how I see the Doctor acting with Martha - showing her how he feels in small gestures.

Very well done! :)

Thank you for reading. :)

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